This caught my attention because it was unique and Vibey. It also built some nice suspense. Not sure what you're using this for. If it's for a Rapper or Singer: I feel like some more drum layers and/or change-ups with the beat are in order. Perhaps change the tempo or double-time at some point? Bitches love Double-Time. Just saying. LOL Maybe some cool sound FX would spice it up a bit too. Stay up.